There are two members in my family
I’m business/salary man
I live Saitama
I have a wife
My first son
I’m ① clerk.
I ② for Sony.
I live ③ Saitama.
I ④ married and ⑤ two kids. ⑥ ⑦ is Toshi; the youngest ⑧ Sawa.
I’m ①a clerk. We need ‘a’ because our name is not “Clerk.”
I ②work for Sony. We don’t our title unless it is a professional title.
I live ③in Saitama. We must use prepositions before locations.
④ I‘m married and ⑤have two kids. ⑥ The ⑦eldest is Toshi; the youngest ⑧is Sawa.
④ Married is something we are.
⑤ We have kids; we don’t say they merely exist.
⑥, ⑦, ⑧ We never list our children by the primacy of latency of their birth; we talk about age in relation to each child.